First draft feedback

Media trailer first draft feedback
 Positive
*Symbolisation of flowers
*Background music has a great impact on the audience
*Voice over works well
*Clear to see what is happening
*Makes you want to purchase the film

Negative
*Tells the story too much
*Drown out all noise when voice over is on
*Music at start, should come after rights screen

Media Poster first draft feedback

Positive
*Clear, easy to read
*Eye contact with actors to audience effective
*Good layout

Negative
*Too much space
*Not enough going on
*Needs to be more exciting
*Doesnt stand out enough

Media magazine front cover first draft

Positive
*Picture suits front cover well
*Nice layout
*Eye contact with audience works well
*Good use of picture

Negative
*Could be better colour coordinated
*No price. Writing at top doesn't stand out enough
*Too much writing, doesn't make it look professional enough